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Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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Udham Singh
Aajj meri janjh dhukani, dhukani siweaan wich ja k.
K Aajj meri janjh dhukani, dhukani siweaan wich ja k.

Desh uto jaan nu main has has warran.
Kitab wich ghorra aajj ohda hi shaara.
thand kaljey ch paini goli seeney ohde lah k.
Aajj meri janjh dhukani, dhukani siweaan wich ja k.

Heerey desh ney gwaey, "LALA LAJPAT RAI".
kai Gandhi jehey aayey, "BHAGAT SINGH" marewaey.
Jago sutey ho zamir nu jaga k.
Aajj meri janjh dhukani, dhukani siweaan wich ja k.

Ena kardeo taang murr gora na stawey.
Daso Iztaa da mul, hath Chuni nu paway.
Betha "Karam" V Othey miley, Ohnu jaffi paa k.
Aajj meri janjh dhukani, dhukani siweaan wich ja k.
27 Jun 2009

kudrat singh
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hello karam
Well done karam. keep it up.
28 Jun 2009

sukhpal singh
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it's very well written in words,...........feelings, emotions, realistic , history and all.......

05 Jun 2018

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