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surjit singh
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sardaari

jehrha taareya mull sardaari da

kade dil ton poch na paavange

saanu kade 84 bhulnhi ni

har peerhi yaad karavaange,

 

putt chhalnhi keete maavan de

jeonde saarhe bhaina de bhai kayee

kayee bachche ronde maapean nu

baithian chittian chunian payee kayee,

 

asin laashan ginhde thak gaye

kayee maarde hunh tak thakke ni

ki hor kise aa roknha si

eh sarkaraan vi dakke ni,

 

jadon challi hawa 47 di

saanu be matlab jeha rolh gayee

asin apnhe ghar lutt hunde rahe

izztan de varke phol gayee,

 

saanu kade azaadi milnhi ni

kaeean de iraade pakke ne

47 ton pehlan dab gaye si

47 baad vi dhakke ne,

 

asin mutthi bhar dab jaande aa

peerh sehnde gathhri bhaari di

aa kalgian waleya vekh jara

saanu sazaa mili sardari di,

saanu sazaa mili.........................

 

09 Jan 2010

Balihar Sandhu BS
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Nice one Bro...keep it up..!!

10 Jan 2010

Sukhvir  Singh
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veer sahi likhya ......................gal dil te laggi hai ................... Good Job

10 Jan 2010

Amrinder Singh
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awesome 22 g.....

 

really touching.... n truth...!!

bahut wadhiya likhat ae.... great work..!!

10 Jan 2010

jasbir singh
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veer mereya sahi likhya ; koii samje ya na samje, par dil awaj jaroori hai

very touching

10 Jan 2010

Satwinder  Satti
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Awesome 22 g really heart touchng. Jeonde wasde raho

11 Jan 2010

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