saade gede te gede lagde ne,
veh tu ek chalak dikhaunda nahi,
 
maape tereyaan nu mil aaounde haan,
tere aaun da koi thikana nahi,
 
behan teri kardi hai makholan,
saada jigra vi koi nimana nahi,
 
ek din allad je khaban vich, pata nahi kithon oh rabb aa gaya,
kuch keha usne mainu, mere kanna ne oh suneya nahi,
 
kuch puchcheya usne mainu,
mere lavzaan ne oh tatoreyan nahi,
 
main ek tuk vekhdi rahi,
per mere jazbaataan ne kuch keha nahi,
 
oh hass ke aage lang geya,
te mere saahan vich oh rukeya nahi,
 
saade gede lagne band ho gaye,
oh milno saatho rukeya nahi.

i know bahaut kuch chalda rehnda tere dimag ch

n u very well know how to give it a direction

keep it up.....n keep sharing your thoughts

looking 4ward to more 4m u

nice to see something for ur side...

good one...... moulding di jaroorat hai thorhi....

there is always scope of improvement...

so changa parhde raho.. te changa likhde jaaonge...

changa likhan waaste changa parhna bahut zaroori hai....

keep sharing..!!!

gud one , jazbaat bharpur ne ,read more n more , hor vi vadiiya likho.

Thanks Aman bhene for the inspiration. Thanks Amrinder for motivation and thanks Yuvi sir for sharing your thoughts.

To write poetry in punjabi was not the cup of my tea, but being on Punjabizm and not sharing any input was somewhat crappy. So, I gave a shot. Hopefully, I'll learn a lot from this plateform.

Thanks a ton.

Aman bhene, its all your support :p