m new member to dis site,pehla sab nu pyar bhari sat shai akaal,

kalam nu rakhya panne utte,jo oh parvatdigaar likhonda gaya likhdi gae,

eh soch ke agar shayad tusi ess nu pasand karo, ethe post kar rahi aan

 

Kis deeve di zaat(kadar) pichani,
jan oh deve ghar nu roshni,

jan oh jale madi masaani,
kis deeve di zaat pichani,
apne tale oh karke nera,
bakiyan da rehnda bharda pani,
kis deeve di zaat pichani.
Oh pai gaya roula dekho,
kis ne eh aag hai lai,
hath ch deeva, oh bhajya janda,
jinhe eh aag hai lai,
hath da deeva bhuban mare,
mein na eh aag hai lai,
aag tan lai insaan ne,
mein tan kul khalkat rushnai,
odhar vi takko,
jine apni nooh machai,
deeva paya bhubaan mare,
mein na eh dhi machai,
aag tan insaan ne lai,
mein tan nere ch chanan kita,
mein na jana kehne aag hai lai,
deeva tan bechara par-upkari,
apne tale oh karke nera,
baki duniya hai rushnai,
kis deeve di zaat pichani,
jan oh deve ghar nu roshni,
jan oh jale madi masaani.

 

apna kimati samma iss rachna nu padan lai dhanwaad.

gall baat heere..

 

Truthful..... quite mature writing... changa laggeya parh k... baakhoobi kalambadh keeta hai tusi jazbaataN nu..... lajawab....

 

"Oh pai gaya roula dekho,
kis ne eh aag hai lai,
hath ch deeva, oh bhajya janda,
jinhe eh aag hai lai,
hath da deeva bhuban mare,
mein na eh aag hai lai,
aag tan lai insaan ne,
mein tan kul khalkat rushnai,
odhar vi takko,
jine apni nooh machai,
deeva paya bhubaan mare,
mein na eh dhi machai,
aag tan insaan ne lai,"

 

Bahut khoob .....

Wellcome to punjabizm preeto ji frm all members and wah kya laajwab rachna hai. Bahut khoob. Keep posting.

tuhada sabna da shukriya mere zajbaatan nu sarhoun lai....

superb,kamal de ehsaas,je hor mehnat karo tan ise nu hi hor polish kar sakde ho.

'apne tale oh karke nera'

tale word hindi da hai , avoid using it.

si,ply amazing.............bohat khoob....shayad meri 1st te akhri post hove...bt kmaal di rachna parhn nu milli

Bahut vadhia ae g....jekar gurmukhi  (font) 'ch hundi te hor vee vadhia hunda...

 

tfs