Naa puch ki aarzoo, yaa ki khawahish hai meri.....
bhul geya haan eh lafz, yaa door ho rehaan haan main..


dobara pad ke wadiya laga hai......eh lines khaas karkey

inder teri eh shaayari taan main padhi yi ni kade ....
bahut yi sohna likheya aye.....
RABB rakha

god bless you...i dn know how many masterpieces u ll write...

davu ji.. shayad tusi eh mehsoos kar lainde ho k jo main likheya eh kis ehsaasaN naal likheya... te iss karke tuhanu changi lagdi ae... te eh mere waaste bahut waddi gall ae k tusi samjhde ho.. te ik ik kavita nu apni poori tawajjo dinde ho....
thanks a lot for such nice words.. and for the wishes.. :)

ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਸੋਹਣੀ ਰਚਨਾ ਹੈ ਬਾਈ ਜੀ .... ਜਿਉਂਦੇ ਵਸਦੇ ਰਹੋ..

Tu taan gal dil te he la laye.

Bhalke ardaas vich ho sake meri maut mang laviN...
iss duniya nu khaure, na-manzoor ho rehaan haan main....

Bohat vadiya...badi hi emotions nu feel karke likhya e tusi....very nice...thanks for sharing

That's another NICE ONE by Amrinder !!!!

Mainu lagda ae main pehlan parhi hai tuhadi eh poem ... te main hairan es layi haan k ... j main parhi hai te Eh kiven ho giya k Ainee Sohnee Rachna dee tareef ch do shabad v na likhe hon ...

I Really Like it !!!!

Thanks Amrinder for sharing....

Te Umeed Hai K Tuhadee Kalam Aise Taran Hee Apna Rang Bikherdi Rahegi !!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bahut hi wadhiya veer
@ balihar veer eh pehla vi kite post kiti hoyi hai amrinder veer ne main vi padhi hoyi hai shayad orkut te. And is kavita nal judeya ik rochak kissa sunaunda haan. Main apne colg vich pehli waar kise hor di likhi hoi kavita sunayi c te us waqt main amrinder veer nu nahi c jaana bas G.S.Gill veer de through jaanda c ke ohna de dost ne te eh kavita sun ke sareyan ne khade ho ke taalian wajayayian c and principal sahab meri tarif de pull bani ja rahe c par main dubara ja ke keha ke eh kavita main ni likhi mere friend amrinder ne likhi hai ta sare hairan ho gaye ke main pehli waar kise di kavita sunayi kyoki eh mainu bahut hi pasand ayi c te ik ik lafz ch jazbaat jhalakde ne jive likhan wale ne poora dil di dunghai cho likheya hove oh jazbaat mainu apne te feel ho rahe c. Really i salute to amrinder veer from bottom of my heart and thanks for sharing here.

@mandeep
Thanks a lot for such nice words.

@balihar sandhu
thanks alot veer ji... for liking it..
te koi gall ni je pehla nahi keeta comment hun sahi.. :)

@satwinder
that took me off the floor... i cant even imagine.. k meri eh rachna kise nu enni changi laggi hovegi.. that it got so much respect n praise... i really thank you for sharing it over there..
mere khyaal naal koi kavita odo e wadhiya manni jaandi ae je parhan waale nu oh saare jazbaat apne mehsoos hunde ne... te mere waaste bahut waddi gall ae.. k tuhanu lagge... it really took me back to the time when i wrote this poem..

thanks 22 g.. thanks a lot..