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Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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kali dukhan wali raat
Mere hanju v heran naley honkey pareshan.
kali dukhan wali raat bhedi khatam na hove.
dil rehnda hai udas bus zakham ne paas.
tahin dil ae vichara mera bhubaan mar rove.
mera maut he inaam badey sir ilzam.
bus kafar he kehndey koi nere na khalove.
koi puch da na baat gum choli ch sogat.
duley akhian chun neer mukh hanjuan nal tove.
Karam chootha jeha hasey gul dil d na dusey.
bheda dusey na tofan kine dil ch samove.
mere hanjun v heran naley honey pareshan .
kali dukhan wali raat bhedi khatam na hove.
24 Jun 2009

Amrinder Singh
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Bahut wadhiya veere...
barhe khoobsurati naal lafz piroye ne...

Aidan hee likhde raho te share karde raho....
24 Jun 2009

davu kaur
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again very nice work....ur friend parmvir is my cousin, he always talk bot ur poetry....nice to read a good work...keep it up....
25 Jun 2009

kudrat singh
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hello
bahut wadiya karam, well done. keep it up.
25 Jun 2009

sukhpal singh
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bohat wadhiya,...........bohat khubb.

05 Mar 2015

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