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Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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Phulkari
Kyoun bejan meinu kar dita mera ki kasoor hai das deo
kyuon peti vich china diti kadi time mile ta kad leo,
kyuon bejan meinu kar dita mera ki kasoor hai das deo

kai saal pehla mere phul banya j chaho ta patti kad deo,
tannhiya te keede lag gaye ne phula tak pahuchan wale ne,
eho arz guzara ohna nu kandya to jara ku bacha leo,
Kyoun bejan meinu kar dita mera ki kasoor hai das deo

kai rutaan injh hi langh gaiaan kai mausam aan k chale gaye
kai virsa bachaun nu kehnde c meinu bina dekhya chale gaye
meinu kehnde ki naam mera bacheyaan nu phulkari das deo
kyuon bejan meinu kar dita mera ki kasoor hai das deo

ik veer mera jinu baag kehnde ohdi halat mere vargi hai
koi "Karam" varga hi janda hai baki dunia udeyte hasdi hai
koi usde sine vich v suain de teer chala deo
meinu maut aaun to pehla ik tand mere te paa deo
kyoun bejan meinu kar dita mera ki kasoor hai das deo
kyuon peti vich china diti kadi time mile ta kad leo
26 Jun 2009

kudrat singh
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hello karam
Well done. keep it up.
27 Jun 2009

ਅਮਨਦੀਪ ਗਿੱਲ
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wow....awesome composition.....bahaut hee vadiya....

strongly feel so.....k eh decorative items hee na ban ke reh jaan.....

 

thanx a ton for writing n sharing this here

07 Nov 2010

Karam Garcha Khottey Sikkey
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dhanwad dhanwad

29 Nov 2010

Jass Panaichan
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bahut vadhia veer ji .........

29 Nov 2010

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