kidaaa kiven kis trhan likh liyaa eh sab kuch tuse . enii vadi gal nu kine asaani naal keh detaa tuse. bhagat kabir ne kiha se gagar vich sagar bharna . tuse taan us de dhii lagdee hoon wah mazaa aagyaa
Good work ! Even i knw a family which suffering frm this stuff...When writing on such a serious issue,try not to make it a rhyme ,bas free hoke likh deo ! bcoz i feel eho jihe matter te likhan wale da zyada zor rhyme te lagg janda jo ki subject te laggna chaheeda ! Overall its a nice thought !