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Saare soojhwaan dosto apne keemti sujhaa den lyi shukaria ,
aman g mai dost nu keh k edit karwa dinda haan ,
jionde vasde rho,
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14 Mar 2011
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| really really nice creation..!!! |
!!!...ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਲਾਜਵਾਬ ਲਿਖਿਆ ਵੀਰ ਜਿ ਹਮੇਸ਼ਾ ਦੀ ਤਰਾਂ...!!!
!!!...ਲਫ਼ਜ਼ਾਂ ਵਿੱਚ ਸਾਦਗੀ ,ਖੂਬਸੂਰਤੀ ਤੇ ਮਿਠਾਸ ਭਰਨੀ ਕੋਈ ਤੁਹਾਡੇ ਤੋਂ ਸਿੱਖੇ...!!!
!!!...ਏਸੇ ਤਰਾਂ ਸੋਹਣਾਂ-ਸੋਹਣਾਂ ਲਿਖਦੇ ਰਹੋ ਤੇ ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਦੇ ਰਹੋ...!!!
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14 Mar 2011
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Veer g dil diya gehraian to shukaria.
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15 Mar 2011
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wah 22 wah nazara le ata
parh ke mann kush ho gaya
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16 Mar 2011
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fantastic...
bahut hi lajawab likheya har vaar di tra..sachmuch zindgi di kash-makash nu bahut vadiya darsaya hai..grea wording
keep writing n keep sharing !!
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17 Mar 2011
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| Awesome |
lajawaab rachna..!!
sachhi kuch nhi bacheya mere kehan nu..bas noor hi noor hai tuhadi kalam da..
jionde vassde raho veer
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17 Mar 2011
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| Jiyo babeyo |
great creation..!!
wah gurminder veer ji kya baatan ne tuhadiya..kalli-kalli line rooh takk sakoon pahunchaundi hai,,,tuhade lafzan di khoobsoorti nu sajda krde haan..
keep writing n keep sharing here plzzzzz
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17 Mar 2011
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Not bad veer ! keep writing...
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17 Mar 2011
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bahut khoob..!!
sachmuch bahut kmaal likhde ho gurminder bai ji te sahitik bulandiyan hun tuhade ton koi jyada door nhi.....lajaaawaab..!!!!!!!!!!!!
jionde vassde raho !!
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17 Mar 2011
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great great great
bahut khoob ji..har likhat vich aini khoobsurti te aini rwaangi k padhan vaale di rooh khush ho jaandi ae...te main harman di gall naal bilkul sehmat haan..rabb tuhanu har sme chrhdi kla ch rakhhe te kaamyabi bakhshe..
jionde vassde raho Gurminder Veer !!!!!!!
divroop taan ehnu vee haale not bad ki kehnda hai....koi haal ni yaar tera vee..
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17 Mar 2011
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