Superb !

Very well written, the verse is brimmimng with sensitivity and nostalgia about no longer being able to do what was done so effortlessly during childhood...

Bahut hi sunder rachna. I must thank my stars that it has bubbled up after a long time and enabled me to enjoy its beauty...

Madam, thnx for sharing and God Bless !

Thank you sir :)

Very Nyyccc Jiii

Nice

ਬਹੁਤ ਹੀ ਬੇਹਤਰੀਨ ਰਚਨਾ ਰਾਜਵਿੰਦਰ ਜੀ,

ਮਲੂਕ ਅਹਿਸਾਸਾਂ ਦੀ ਹਵਾ ਵਰਗੀ, ਬਹੁਤ ਸੋਹਣੀ

ਸ਼ੇਅਰ ਕਰਨ ਲੲੀ ਸ਼ੁਕਰੀਆ ਜੀ।

Hirdey..Jaspreet ...Sandeep... G. . aap sabh da shukria :)