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Very well written navi g.truth of the society.keep it up dear.one really needs courage to speak truth and ony a poet can do it.here you go dear .thanks for sharing
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03 Mar 2015
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bahut sahi likhia ...jadoo mansik balakaar hunda ta ohi janda jis naal beetdi aaa....
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04 Mar 2015
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thank you so much navpreet g and gurpreet g
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05 Mar 2015
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Saade mojuda samajik dhanche te chot mardi hoyi eh rachna vartik pakho bhavein kamzor vi hove par sachayi beyan karn di taqat rakhdi hai ..
Narinder si gh kapoor saab furmaunde ne k kavita vich shabdan ne ghund kadheya hunda hai .. Should tell more n more with less n less words ...
Ik bohat achhi koshish NVI apni kalm rahin, smaj de nighaar nu chitaun lyi te apni gall bold ho ke kehn layi ..
Duaawan
Stay kaim ji 🙏
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16 Mar 2015
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maavi sir thank you so much for your valueable comments.....i will try my best for further improvement
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18 Mar 2015
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ਪੜ੍ਹ ਕੇ ਜੋ ਮਹਿਸੂਸ ਹੁੰਦਾ ਹੈ ਉਸਨੂੰ ਬਿਆਨ ਕਰਨਾ ਬੜਾ ਔਖਾ ਏ-ਸ਼ਬਦ ਨਹੀਂ ਹਨ -- ਬਸ ਸਮਾਜ ਸੁਧਰ ਜੇ- ਇਹੀ ਦੁਆ ਹੈ
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22 Mar 2015
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ਪੜ੍ਹ ਕੇ ਜੋ ਮਹਿਸੂਸ ਹੁੰਦਾ ਹੈ ਉਸਨੂੰ ਬਿਆਨ ਕਰਨਾ ਬੜਾ ਔਖਾ ਏ-ਸ਼ਬਦ ਨਹੀਂ ਹਨ -- ਬਸ ਸਮਾਜ ਸੁਧਰ ਜੇ- ਇਹੀ ਦੁਆ ਹੈ
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22 Mar 2015
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