bhut wadiya story hai g. dill nu chhooo liya es ney

ਸਤ ਸ਼੍ਰੀ ਅਕਾਲ ਵੀਰ ਜੀ .............

ਕੁਝ ਸਮਜ ਨੀ ਆ ਰਿਹਾ ਕੇ ਮੈਂ ਇਸ ਕਹਾਣੀ ਦੀ ਪ੍ਰਸੰਸਾ ਕਰਾ ਯਾ ਆਪਣੇ ਸ੍ਮਾਜ ਚ ਪਏ ਏਹੋ ਜਿਹੇ ਕੀੜੇਆ ਤੇ ਨਮਕ ਪਾਕੇ  ਪਾਣੀ ਬਣਾ ਦਿਆ ..................
ਜੇਹੜੇ ਰਿਸਤੇਆ ਦੀ ਆੜ ਵਿਚ ਮਨ ਮਰ੍ਜੀਆ ਕ੍ਰ੍ਦੇ੪ ਫਿਰਦੇ ਨੇ ........
ਮੇਰੇ ਹਿਸਾਬ ਨਾਲ ਅਸੀਂ ਲੋਕ ਹੀ ਬਦਕਿਸਮਤ ਹਾ ਜੋ ਇਹ ਲੋਕ ਸਾਡੇ ਵਿਚਕਾਰ ਨੇ ......
ਰਿਸ਼੍ਤੇਇਆ ਨੂ ਸਹੀ ਤਰਜੀਹ ਦੇਣ ਵਾਲੇ ਇਨਸਾਨ ਹੀ ਭਾਗਾ ਵਾਲੇ ਹੁੰਦੇ ਨੇ .........

bahut hi dard bhari daastan bai ji

keep writing 

rabb hor v taufiq bakhse aap ji di kalam nu

jeo 

rabb rakha

story interesting c,pard k dukh hoya

but os ladki da ki banya baad vich?

os de ghar dyaa ne os nu laban di koshish nahi kiti?

Bahut Vadhia Rupinder G...as always something different...tfs

very nice...........ur story has got an influencing visual effects on imagination.........n tht makes it all d more interesting n alluring....keep writing n keep sharing.....all d best for d rest

Roop ji

It is a good the story. It is also like by so many other readers. But if we think one step further you are raising a problem? Right, and everyone of us like the problem. But what about solution ?  

Rupinder ji,

you are a good story writer,

And you are one of few who write and share on the internet,

keep writing

Eh story ajj de jamane da sach hai tusi sach nu bahut vaddia tarikenal likhea hai veere bahut vaddia rabb tuhahu hamesha chardi kalanch rakhe 

http://uddari.wordpress.com/2010/08/28/incest-harayanas-shameful-social-heritage/comment-page-1/#comment-1433

detail click above link....

It is rare that the question of incest is raised in the Punjab on either side of the border. Uddari supports the initiation of this discussion, and suggests that it is not just the state of Haryana where incest is being faced by Punjabi women and youth but that we are being victimized in other areas of Indian and Pakistani Punjab as well.

Indeed it is a mockery of words such as ‘honour’ where women are being killed and brutalized for choosing their sexual partners when the same people and the same value systems perpetuate incest by hiding it, by dis-empowering women and children, and by protecting the perpetrators.

I cannot find another comparable situation where women, young women, and male/female children are being sexually and emotionally exploited by, in most cases, their older male relatives. Incest is known to cause long term and permanent emotional and psychological damage to victimized individuals, and yet we are unwilling to even discuss it because it challenges our prevalent social, moral and familial value systems. This includes the tradition of cousin marriages in Muslim families.