ssa aman veere!!

am surprised to read ,aine busy bande vi likhde ne,bahut khoob, kabil-e-tareef janab .gud to see ur new avtar ,umeed hai ke tuhanu parde ravange.keep writing and sharing.jeo

22 g.... instead we feel privileged to read such kind of poems...!!

its completely our pleasure... 

Great job..!!

Sat Shri Akal Yuvi Ji & Amrinder Ji

Asal gal eh hai bai jee , main koi lekhak tan hai nahi ......sab tuhade warge veeran di Sangat da asar hai .......

sachai tan eh hai ki main apne Pind nu bahut miss karda han ........ ek koi kavita ya nazam nahi .....eh tan sab oh gallan ne jo main apne Khet ja ke ....Pendu jiwan nu shehri life nal compare karde hoye likhiyan see.........

tuhanu sab nu pasand aayee

bahut -bahut shukriya !!!!

bahut hi sarl bhasha ch tusi apne ehsaas kaagaz te utar ditte... bahut changa lagga tuhadi ih kavita parh ke

thanks.

shukriya Navkiran jee ......!!!!!

bakhooobii bayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan kiittaa janaaab.....

keep it up...................

bahut khobsurti naal bayea kiti hai rachna........

Sat Shri Akal Jasbir Singh Ji & Arshdeep kaur ji

Bahut - Bahut Shukriya ji,

jad tuhade warge insaan , mrere warge nimane dee tarif karan tan bahut maan hunda  !!!!

Beleive me..... I can't explain my happiness in words.....!!!!

bahaut vadiya g...read krde hoye sare scene akhan sahmne ghum rahe c......very well writtenloved d lines

ਤੈਨੂੰ ਸੁਨਿਹਰੀ ਗੀਟੀਆਂ ਗਿਣਨ ਤੋਂ,

ਵਿਹਲ ਲੱਗੇ, ਤਾਂ ਕਦੇ ਸਾਡੇ ਪਿੰਡਾਂ ਦੀਆਂ,

ਗੱਡੀਆਂ ਵਾਲ਼ੀਆਂ ਦਾ ਲਿਬਾਸ ਦੇਖੀਂ..!

ਤੇਰਾ ਭਰਮ ਲੱਥ ਜਾਵੇਗਾ..!!

ਉਹਨਾਂ ਦਾ ਪਹਿਰਾਵਾ ਦੱਸ ਦੇਵੇਗਾ,

ਕਿ ਸੁਹੱਪਣ ਸਿਰਫ਼ ਅਮੀਰਾਂ ਕੋਲ਼ ਹੀ ਨਹੀਂ,

ਸੁਹੱਪਣ ਝੁੱਗੀਆਂ ਵਿਚ ਵੀ ਵਸਦੈ!!

bhuut khuub!!

ultimate...........