bahut hi khoobsoorti naal likheya hai ji..bilkul sachhiyan gallan kahiyan tusi..jo saade desh layi apni jaan nichavar karde han ohna nu ban da satikar nahi milda .ohna de parivaran nu rulna hi painda hai...eh line sachmuch bahut hi great han..parmatma tuhanu ese tra sohna-sohna likhan da bal bakhshe....thankx for sharing
its a great creation ,. sachmuch bahut hi khoobsoorat rachna hai.. bahut hi sohni koshish kiti hai tusi lokan nu jagaun di jo apne farz te duty bhull ke desh da ghaan kar rhe han..shuru ton lai ke ant takk tusi bahut hi parbhavshali likheya bahut kamaal wording vich..keep writing n keep sharing..god bless u
bahut hi change vichaar han tuhade..likheya vi bahut hi sohna hai..start to end kamaal hai..saade desh de ehna real heros baare vee sarkaran nu sochna chahida hai...
rabb tuhanu te tuhadi kalam nu tarakkiyan bakhshe.......